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©2009 =arumdamour
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Pain.

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Okay...here we go again. I wrote an in-depth critique, clicked "Need help?" and lost it all.

Here's the essence;

It's a very powerful image baby.
The description needs a brush-up, because it doesn't describe the image very well. You need to relay his bending up and down, so that the viewer can absorbe that.
It doesn't influence the fact, that my heart bleeds with his situation. I saw people like him too many times in Manila. It is heartbreaking.

Technically, the clarity is awesome, and the journalistic evaluation is beyond good. I think you should persue this topic more my love.
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All I can see are those in the background, completely apathetic. Therein, the contrast itself, lies the irony and pain...

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Katie Franke
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Exactly what this image is about, Katie.

Thought about Phil Collins' "another day in paradise"...

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April 17
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FinePix S7000
1/724 second
F/3.1
29 mm
200
Apr 18, 2009, 7:03:35 AM

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